OK FIRST I MUST TELL ANYONE THAT COMES TO MY PAGE THAT I ALMOST ALWAYS WRITE IN ALL CAPS. I AM NOT SCREAMING, BEING RUDE, OR TRYING TO ATTRACT ATTENTION, I JUST LIKE THE WAY IT LOOKS AND HAVE BEEN DOING IT SINCE I WAS 13. IT IS MY WAY.

NOW, IF YOU PRESS NEXT, YOU WILL BE LAUNCHED INTO THE 4TH (POSSIBLY INCOMPLETE) CHAPTER OF A BOOK I STARTED WRITING ALMOST 2-3 YEARS AGO WHEN I WAS 16 AND 17. I AM NOW 19, AND PLAN ON FINISHING IT, THEREFOR PLACING IT HERE. I AM GOING TO BE COMPLETELY REWRITING IT, AND CHANGING MOST OF THE NAMES IN IT, BUT FOR THE MOST PART IT IS ALL THERE UP TO THAT PIONT. TO GET TO THE VERY BEGINING (AND I DO THINK THE READ IS WORTH IT) YOU WILL HAVE TO GO BACK TO MY FIRST ENTRY, ABOUT 4 PAGES/ENTRIES BACK.

THEY ARE ALL FAIRLY LONG, BUT I THINK THEY ARE INTERESTING. IF YOU DO READ IT, PLEASE LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK. ALL ENTRIEDS WILL BE UPDATED IF EDITED, AND MORE WILL COME AS I WRITE IT.

ABOUT THE BOOK:

IT IS FANTASY, USING SLIGHTLY SCIENTIFIC DESCRIPTIONS TO MAKE THE STORY SEMI REALISTIC. IT IS FROM A THIRD PERSON PIONT OF VEIW. THE STORY DEVIDES BETWEEN TWO MAIN CHARACTERS, SEVRIN, AND GARDAMIEN. A LITTLE ROMANCE IS IN THE STORY BUT THAT DOES NOT OVERRULE THE ACTION. TO BE HONEST IT READS ALOT MORE LIKE A MOVIE RATHER THAN A BOOK. IN THE END THERE ARE TWO WORLDS, THIS ONE AND ANOTHER MORE MAGICAL ONE. THIS BOOK ONLY DEALS WITH THE CASTLE WHICH IS A LIVING ORGANISM LIKE THE UNIVERSE, WITH SELF MOTIVATING ENERGY. THERE ARE CREATURE, DEVICES AND THINGS IN THIS WORLD THAT ARE USED, AND LAWS. PRETTY MUCH FULFILLING THE DESTINY OF THE TWO MAIN CHARACTERS.


I ALSO HAVE ANOTHER BOOK MUCH BETTER. IN THE BEGINING THERE IS A GUY AND GIRL IN LOVE, SEVRIN AND MALICHI (I KNOW SAME GIRL NAME) THEY ARE ON THE BEACH IN FLORIDA ABOUT TO GET MARRIED. THEN A DEVIOUS PLOT UNFOLDS BY A HIGH RANKING CRIMINAL, TO KILL THE COP FOLLOWING HIM. THEN SEVRIN AND MALICHI GET IN THE WAY OF HIS POLANS AND HE ENDS UP MURDERING BOTH OF THEM. THE STORY STILL FOLLOWS SEVRIN THROUGH HER DEATH, AND TORTURE, INTO THE AFTERLIFE WHERE SHE MEETS UP WITH MALICHI, AND THEY PLOT TO MAKE CONTACT AS SPIRITS WITH THE DETECTIVE, SO THE DETECTIVE KILLS THIER MURDERER. ALTHOUGH THAT IS AS FAR AS I HAVE GONE ON THAT BOOK, THE STORY WILL CONTINUE ON TO SHOW THEM LEAVING THE SPIRIT PLANE AND GOING TO THIER TRUE AFTERLIFE WHICH WILL BE COMPLETELY PHYCHO, MORBID, AND ONE HELL OF AN ADVENTURE. IN THIS WRITTING IT IS MORE LIKE FLASH BACKS AND A PUZZLE WHERE THE PEICES COME TOGETHER, SEMI MYSTERIOUS. I MIGHT POST THAT STORY IF ANYONE REQUESTS ME TO...I WOULD LIKE TO GET FURTHER WITH IT.

MORBID ANIMOSITY